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| Hello Lonnie, as I mentioned in the email
I apologise for the time it took. As you can see I took a different angle with the sales pitch. Especially now, in the midst of this recession people are not going out as much. I wanted to sell to the people that might be staying home. It is fairly long copy but for Ebooks selling for $40 this is just about right. I am not a graphics artist and will be the first to admit that the graphics could stand some improvement. I think the idea of having photos of dinner, food prep and romance would work well here, you just need better photos and maybe a better layout. Let me know what you think |
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